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August 9, 2004

Posted by anoddphrase in Uncategorized.
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what am I waiting for…


 


                                    perfection?


                        or


                              the perfect moment….


 


 


 

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1. GalileoGalilei - August 16, 2004

yeas

2. Fairyskisses77 - August 21, 2004

hmm, i actually like Clair and Andrew. It’s… kind of fitting for the type of characters I have in mind.
You may have a point about the flashbacks, but I don’t want to give much away. I’d rather just leave it for the reader to guess or fabricate on their own. I’ll just drop a few more hints so it’s not too sparse. But yea, don’t wanna do that. It’s supposed to be short. And it’s more about the moment. not really the past. just brief glimpses of it. The thing I was going for was just that perfect moment. Or that moment. which is kind of funny because that’s what this post is about.
the thing is, this started out in my head as a scene in a movie, or just a short movie in itself. i can see the entire thing in my head. i can play it whenever I want, but I felt I needed to write it down. I was originally going to write it down in script form, maybe, but I decided against it. that’s another reason why I don’t like the ideas of flashbacks. it’s just supposed to be about that moment, you know? yea.
and about the banter. yea, it’s a bit overdone, but the whole SCENE is overdone. Maybe i’ll do somet paring, but I doubt I’ll have the heart to rip any of those out. ='[
anyway, thanks for your comment! I appreciate it more than you know. I will be workshopping this piece. I like it too.
I was thinking about you a lot today! i was telling stories about h’kiss in the car today while driving for about 6 hours from phoenix to LA, and i talked about skiing, and how you lent me your skis, and how i lost your boots *winces* and how I scratched your skis *double wince* and how you were so nice about it, and how you were so great at teaching me how to ski, blah blah blah, and then there was the angie-shoes incident, blah blah blah, so yea. =] I miss ya, babe.
“fjwkdi? fkdiwker!! jvmskdfs…. grr…”


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